The Ocean
The ocean is a great place to live, well, not if you’re a fish. A lot of people think ocean is just it’s just fish but it also has turtles, dolphins, sharks and much more.
YOU may think it’s would be great to live there but for fish and a lot of other animals there are predators like for a fish there is almost every other animal there is a animal that wants to eat them or do other things like people who don’t recycle are killing thousands of fish in just a year. And you thought it was a great place to live! Every animal has to worry about at least two things to hurt them other animals and us. We kill fish, it may not be on purpose but we do and thousands of animals are dying of pollution. This is importent because we won’t have all the beautiful fish and animals in the water.
3 comments:
Animals are my favorite things in the world. Most of all the oceans animals. Hate thinking of them dying. Hope your essay works.
Sofiya
Emily,
This is very important! I'm so glad you wrote about this. Your essay shows how much you care for animals. Good job and keep writing!
Emma S.
Emily,
After reading the recently posted blogs such as yours, I see that you kids are very concerned about the pollution of our world. I agree that ocean animals are endangered due to human pollution. When we were visiting Sanibel Island, Florida, this winter, every day we saw dolphins swimming out in the ocean, and my kids were so delighted to spot them. Could you imagine how sad this world would be if the dolphins were to die because of pollution? Keep encouraging everyone to protect our aquatic friends by not polluting. You can make a difference!
Mrs. Taylor (Nicholas' mom)
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